Blog Entry[Poem] Emotions - 21 July 2006Jul 21, '06 2:08 AM
for everyone
Mood: Tak Tau
Listening To:
Tak Tau








Emotions

The light of hope, dimm'd temporarily,

Causing human eyesight, shutting blindly.

The strength taken, uncountable,
Standing on unsupported feet - impossible.

Toss me candles, and some matches,
So I have light, to avoid bruises and scratches.

Stay away from me, but don't move.
Set a distance for me, to pull through.

Life goes on, as time always ticks,
I will move on, until I'm buried 6 feet deep.


Poetry reflects emotions of one; the best. And it brings out sadness, while every word is written.

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wormy wrote on Jul 21, '06
so dope wannnnnn
glacius wrote on Jul 21, '06
It's kinda confusing after I read it though. Lol. Cockney is dope. To express poetry through Cockney would be the best, I geuss?
carynpy wrote on Jul 21, '06
dope...x(...but y so emo wans
paulinahhh wrote on Jul 21, '06
emo~ism is kicking in...
glacius wrote on Jul 21, '06
I own x)
paulinahhh wrote on Jul 21, '06
u shud go to autocity more often.. =D
ian86 wrote on Jul 21, '06
whao...

with the mood i'm in now...my eyes are already watery.
eunicetan wrote on Jul 21, '06
so emo. i'm so tired.
wormy wrote on Jul 21, '06
=(
glacius wrote on Jul 21, '06
Wuttup wit you, ian..? :S
ian86 wrote on Jul 21, '06
Nuthin much ler jean...juz mentally tired...n quite down...
glacius wrote on Jul 21, '06
:(.. Get well soon, man..
ian86 wrote on Jul 21, '06
yeah...sighz...it's like...after a whole week at hostel, n now when i get back to my own hse for the weekend...

it felt so so so good!! n when i hit my own bed...WHAO!! i fell asleep the very moment i shut my eyes...

the tiredness i felt is as if...i've juz went thru a 400KM marathon from KL to PG.
n after i sleep...i refuse to wake up...i really refuse to wake up or get conscious...coz when i wake up...my mind begin the marathon again...

damn...i think i need sum phyciatrist or sumthin man...
glacius wrote on Jul 21, '06
Haha.. maybe you need to rest a little bit after what happened, man.. Just chill ^^..
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