Blog Entry[Poem] Things That Never Went Right.Jul 16, '06 11:05 PM
for everyone
Mood: Inspired
Listening To: The PC fan








Well, this is something I wrote out after 3 hours of sleep. I don't know why, but I'm perfectly fine. I've got troubles sleeping last night, and I've got troubles staying asleep too. wtf? Anyways, here's a piece on that FDM Love Album that WoRmY and Schiz had in mind.. I could do a song based on this myself.. But I've got no drum beats..



Things That Never Went Right.

Despite the times I've tried, this made me wonder why,

The things I've done wrong, though there's no tear in my eye.
Not to say, I didn't love her, for who she was,
Just that I never saw this coming because there was no cause.

For me to be shocked, to lose my very loved one,
Never knowing that it ended, when I thought it just begun.
As it is the new year, for this couple, which is "us",
Nothing lasts forever, and this feels like a contracted curse.

I can't understand why, I'm not feeling depressed,
For losing this girl in my heart, who was the best.
Well, at least to me, though there were hatred from people,
From guys and girls, when our relationship unfold.

At least all this didn't end in an accident,
Where nobody was killed and where death wasn't a present.
Because that's the worst way, to lose someone you truly love,
Taken away from you, a future vision - blurred.



... But I never regret, for losing this sweet girl,

Because her honesty in friendship, is the best thing in this world.
And everything she said out with a truthful heart,
And no, from the start, she never tore my heart apart.

Even if she did, she would do it without knowing,
I know her, I loved her and I'm being understanding.
And what is done is said, and what is said is done,
And I can never stop a breakup when it has begun.

With reasons spun, and it's all over the place,
Now knowing love was a game I could never have aced.
It was a clean game, none of us were cheaters,
All playing by the rules, and nobody was the winner.

As long as people are happy, that's all that matters,
And I'll continue walking, even there's a dark weather.
And even if I fall, I'll get up with all of my might,
'Cause this is one of those things, that never went right.



Wrote up 2 verses in just half an hour.. Inspirations are just wonders I can never capture and bottle it up.

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schizzow wrote on Jul 16, '06
Chunted sial.
schizzow wrote on Jul 16, '06
Emoness produces the dopest rhymes.
glacius wrote on Jul 16, '06
It's either emo, or love. But the problem with love, you write poems, but never rhymes x)
wormy wrote on Jul 17, '06
chunted sial

emoness also produces the illest songs.
glacius wrote on Jul 17, '06
Bookmark this..or save it into an FDM dataspace x)... Will be handy before you head to moomooland.
wormy wrote on Jul 17, '06
ahaks
ahpeng7288 wrote on Jul 17, '06
Chunted sial.
:)
eunicetan wrote on Jul 17, '06
One word. Dope.
roosh8 wrote on Jul 17, '06, edited on Jul 17, '06
emoness leads to creativity x)
glacius wrote on Jul 17, '06
Still some glitches here and there.. But things are gonna be fine with just a few more patching up.. Where's WoRmY.. need to start discussing to him about this T.T
wormy wrote on Jul 17, '06
paiseh
qpidv wrote on Jul 17, '06
I'm stil amazed by the gift you hv... nvrdles, m proud of you...:)
tis piece brought tears to my eyes..
schizzow wrote on Jul 17, '06
Love = jiwang = emo = dope pieces. :)
glacius wrote on Jul 17, '06
Vanesa, Thank you. That coming from you, it means a lot.. :)... Every story that begins, has a way to end, huh?... I'm glad you left a reply.. =)..
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