Mood: Headache-d
Listening To: Il Divo - Regres a Mi







But it turned out to be a joke instead. Lmao. I don't know.. I had lots of shit going on in my mind and I can't even get myself a steady topic to write about.. Comments and hate comments are much appreciated.




The time has come; the sun has set
Friday the 13th has come into place.
The legend says; the most blood spilt
By one blade, caused by the human race.

The psychotic killer; turned into a legend
but on this day; it's a curse.
Nobody else has faced it
But only me.

The dark skies soars over the light,
Trapt within; I've turned lazy to fight.
Still believing in what's wrong and right,
Still wishing that through this body, will be the blade's final flight.

After each night; comes the dawn,
But I'm buried within a place where no sun shines.
Being left in the dark where nobody has gone before,
Because I'm the only one who's being defied.

The antartic wind blows by; sending chills down my spine,
Not even I can withstand the weather I once could.
Leaving long and slow breaths,
Slowly watching myself turn motionless.


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schizzow wrote on Jan 16, '06
Where got joke. Lmfao. Nice ah.
glacius wrote on Jan 16, '06
This one, I really tak tau. Lmao
schizzow wrote on Jan 16, '06
Nice wharts.
glacius wrote on Jan 16, '06
glacius said
I really tak tau
kimberlysqy wrote on Jan 16, '06
No joke, reminds me of Halloween wanz. =.=
wormy wrote on Jan 16, '06
i read later har..
i need to finish multiplying then study
paulinahhh wrote on Jan 16, '06
hahaha... nice nice.... but somehow would be nicer if it wasnt so.... uneven ???? dunno..... lalalala.... me crap....
glacius wrote on Jan 16, '06
I duno man. lmao. I was fucked up when I wrote this. Lololololol
paulinahhh wrote on Jan 16, '06
... jeah....usually everyone is when they write somethingl.... that's wat makes it gr8
carynpy wrote on Jan 16, '06
nice...=D....
babyeeyore88 wrote on Jan 16, '06
i'm lazy to read..i nid to finish checking my multiply. i'll read some time later. sorry beh..
paulinahhh wrote on Jan 16, '06
cham~ness... and i tot only wormy would do that.....aihz....
wormy wrote on Jan 16, '06
8-)
glacius wrote on Jan 17, '06
Yeah. Very bad wan these people T_T
wormy wrote on Jan 17, '06
8-)
paulinahhh wrote on Jan 17, '06
=P
eunicetan wrote on Jan 19, '06
Best not to use words like lazy in your poem. Not canggih. Lol. Guna la macam.. Idle or futile.. =D
wormy wrote on Jan 19, '06
ahaks
looloo is dope
glacius wrote on Jan 19, '06
Ahhh.. My vocab isn't as wide as yours, looloo.


But thanks :D.. I'll keep that in mind :D
wormy wrote on Jan 19, '06
dope sial
paulinahhh wrote on Jan 19, '06
yeah... dope~ness.....
eunicetan wrote on Jan 20, '06
Go look for those online thesaurus ma.. When you proof read your poem ah.. You type in those words that you figure could be replaced with more canggih sounding words.. And ta-da! You have other options. That's the easy way la. The harder way is to just read the dictionary more often. Lol.
paulinahhh wrote on Jan 20, '06
I WANNA BUY A RHYMING DICTIONARY !!!!
but damn expensive... goanna buy one after CNY !!! jeah.....
wormy wrote on Jan 20, '06
nonit lah

Rhymezone.com
glacius wrote on Jan 20, '06
T____________________________T


THat's no fun.. I've never went online to get rhymes or similar meaning words .. T__________________T
paulinahhh wrote on Jan 20, '06
...... lalalala.....
wormy wrote on Jan 20, '06
Thesaurus u mean
paulinahhh wrote on Jan 22, '06
who mean what ???
wormy wrote on Jan 22, '06
wormy means king
paulinahhh wrote on Jan 22, '06
perasan~ism... !!!
wormy wrote on Jan 22, '06
where gorts
paulinahhh wrote on Jan 22, '06
there loh... nah down there....
wormy wrote on Jan 22, '06
where?
paulinahhh wrote on Jan 22, '06
there..... look properly....
wormy wrote on Jan 22, '06
i see soil
paulinahhh wrote on Jan 22, '06
cham lah... memang cheh meh wan lah you !!!
wormy wrote on Jan 22, '06
so bad wan you
paulinahhh wrote on Jan 22, '06
lalalalala....
wormy wrote on Jan 22, '06
so bad wan you
paulinahhh wrote on Jan 22, '06
lalalalala....
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